Remember what we heard about Roger in the class today. Now rewrite Roger's story. Deadline is 5th January.
Before Christmes days there was a man. The man name is Roger. He is 55 years old. He was unhappy and crying. He missed the grandchild and son, so didn't go to the son's house. He didn't buy a bus ticket, because he has no money in his pocket . One day he walked on the street and saw the wallet on the street. He opened the wallet and saw the 500$, ID cart and driver's license. The owner of the wallet's adress is on the driver's license. He went to adress.He rang the door. One man opened the door. The man saw the wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was gift for his wafe,who died. The man made an avard 500$ for Roger. Roger run to bus station and he bought the bus ticket and visited to grandchild and son.
BERK YÜCEL
Before Christmas day there was a man. Man's name Roger. He is 55 years old. He was unhappy and crying. He missed the grandchildren and son so didn't go to the son's house. He didn't buy a bus ticket because he has no money in his pocket. One day he walked on the road and saw the wallet on the road. He opened the wallet and saw the 500 dolars, ID card and driver's license. He went to adress. And he rang the door. One man opened the door and the man saw the wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was gift for his wife who died. The man made an award 500 dollers for Roger. Roger run to bus station and he bought the bus ticket and visited to grandchildren and son. HÜSEYİN VURAL. TEACHER GURUR DUYDUĞUNUZU HİSSEDİYORUZ :D
'BEN SİZLE GURUR DUYDUM (ÖZGE) WOW :D'
I am really proud of you, Huseyin and Berk! I am proud of Ozge, too! Bana boyle ogrenci lazim! A.E.
Roger is a old man. Before Christmas day he wanted see grandchildren but he didn't have any many so he didn't buy a bus ticket. He was unhappy.He was crying. And then he walked on the park and suddenly he saw a wallet .It was very old. He pick up the wallet and opened. He saw some cards , $ 500 and a address. He went to adrres and rang the door. A old man opened the door. He saw wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was a gift from his wife who died. He gave $ 500 to Roger. Roger was very happy he went to bus station and bought a ticket. Finnaly he saw his family.
ROGER'S STORY
There was a old man whose name was Roger. One day which was before the Christmas he wanted to visit his grandchildren and his son but he didn't have any money for bought a bus ticket so he was very sad. Than when he was walking he found a wallet. He pick up the wallet and look in. In the wallet there were a adress, ID card and $ 500. Roger went to the owner of the wallet's adress. He rung the door and a old man opened the door. Roger gave the wallet to him. The old man was very happy because this wallet was his dead wife's present. The old man gave$ 500 to Roger. Roger was very happy because he could visit his grandchildren and his son. In the end Roger was with his family.
YASEMİN
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ROGER'S STORY
Roger was a man with old clothes and old shoes and Roger was walking on way.Roger will board the bus but roger wasn't money.Roger saw wallet on place and he looked in wallet.
There were 1500 dollars in the wallet.Roger took away the wallet to the owner wallet.The owner of the wallet gave 1500 dollars.Roger was very happy and Roger bought bus ticket...
...Gonca... Read your story and enhance it, Gonca, OK?
Before Christmes days there was a man. The man name is Roger. He is 55 years old. He was unhappy and crying. He missed the grandchild and son, so didn't go to the son's house. He didn't buy a bus ticket, because he has no money in his pocket . One day he walked on the street and saw the wallet on the street. He opened the wallet and saw the 500$, ID cart and driver's license. The owner of the wallet's adress is on the driver's license. He went to adress.He rang the door. One man opened the door. The man saw the wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was gift for his wafe,who died. The man made an avard 500$ for Roger. Roger run to bus station and he bought the bus ticket and visited to grandchild and son.
BERK YÜCEL
Before Christmas day there was a man. Man's name Roger. He is 55 years old. He was unhappy and crying. He missed the grandchildren and son so didn't go to the son's house. He didn't buy a bus ticket because he has no money in his pocket. One day he walked on the road and saw the wallet on the road. He opened the wallet and saw the 500 dolars, ID card and driver's license. He went to adress. And he rang the door. One man opened the door and the man saw the wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was gift for his wife who died. The man made an award 500 dollers for Roger. Roger run to bus station and he bought the bus ticket and visited to grandchildren and son.
HÜSEYİN VURAL.
TEACHER GURUR DUYDUĞUNUZU HİSSEDİYORUZ :D
'BEN SİZLE GURUR DUYDUM (ÖZGE) WOW :D'
I am really proud of you, Huseyin and Berk! I am proud of Ozge, too! Bana boyle ogrenci lazim! A.E.
Roger is a old man. Before Christmas day he wanted see grandchildren but he didn't have any many so he didn't buy a bus ticket. He was unhappy.He was crying. And then he walked on the park and suddenly he saw a wallet .It was very old. He pick up the wallet and opened. He saw some cards , $ 500 and a address. He went to adrres and rang the door. A old man opened the door. He saw wallet and he was very happy because the wallet was a gift from his wife who died. He gave $ 500 to Roger. Roger was very happy he went to bus station and bought a ticket. Finnaly he saw his family.
ROGER'S STORY
There was a old man whose name was Roger. One day which was before the Christmas he wanted to visit his grandchildren and his son but he didn't have any money for bought a bus ticket so he was very sad. Than when he was walking he found a wallet. He pick up the wallet and look in. In the wallet there were a adress, ID card and $ 500. Roger went to the owner of the wallet's adress. He rung the door and a old man opened the door. Roger gave the wallet to him. The old man was very happy because this wallet was his dead wife's present. The old man gave $ 500 to Roger. Roger was very happy because he could visit his grandchildren and his son. In the end Roger was with his family.
YASEMİN
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ROGER'S STORY
Roger was a man with old clothes and old shoes and Roger was walking on way.Roger will board the bus but roger wasn't money.Roger saw wallet on place and he looked in wallet.
There were 1500 dollars in the wallet.Roger took away the wallet to the owner wallet.The owner of the wallet gave 1500 dollars.Roger was very happy and Roger bought bus ticket...
...Gonca... Read your story and enhance it, Gonca, OK?
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